Mahabharat;summary

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Mahabharat is an ancient Indian classic written by Ved Vyasa

Part A:

Mahabharat is a very interesting epic where Krishna(Vishnu*) comes in, but that’s beside the point. Yudhisthir,Bhim, Arjuna, Sahadeva and Nakula are sent into exile because they played a game of dice(gambling) and got banished to the forest for 14 years and they had to spend the last year in hiding(no one could see them), Dhuryodhan(the villain) would not give them their kingdom back(Indraprastha) and they started a war called the Mahabharata.

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  1. Hello, this is me, one of your friends. Just wanted to remind to correct the grammatical errors here. So here are some them for you to fix:

    1. It’s “Ved Vyasa” or “Veda Vyasa” not “Ved Vya” so I suggest you to put an extra s and a
    2. For the beginning of your paragraph. Please make it clear what it means when you started it with “part A Mahabharat” what is that suppose to mean? if the part A means this is the first part, then put a “:” symbol before putting Mahabharat, and I think either way you should still put the “p” capital because it’s the beginning of the sentence.
    3. Since Krishna, Sahadeva and Nakula are names, and therefore pronouns, the first letter of them should be in capital.
    4. This is more of a suggestion, but you don’t have to add a comma and then put in the word “(gambling)”. You can put it before the comma since you’re explaining what it meant when they were playing a game of dice.
    5. No need to add “he”. Either remove it or replace it with “they”
    6. You spelled “villain” wrong, you spelled it as “villian”
    7. And lastly, put something like “and” or “thus” before “they”.

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